Namaste Readers!! Welcome back to my blog. How are you all? I hope you all are fine. So as I posted a story and here is its 2nd part.
So as we opened Map we all found that it showed the way to Microa Island that Rabbit told us about!!!๐คฉ.For about a minute or 2 there was pin drop silence. We all were lost in our thoughts. But now our first impulse was to find that golden key that rabbit told us about for opening the door of castle๐ฐ.We thought we will take coins later. We checked the map carefully.
This was our map :
So to find the key we have to get out of that dark golden cave.After walking a while we came back to that diverging point where 2 caves one golden and one azure were dividing. As we came there, they got vanished๐ฑand there came a hole from where a beam of amethyst light was coming and map was showing us to go there.We had no other option. One by one we all got out of the hole as it was small. After coming from that hole we took a deep breathe (phoooooo) as there we were having difficulty in breathing but nobody said as nobody wants to miss fun. We turn around and were astonished after checking the beautiful surroundings around us trees full with candies๐ฌ๐ญ๐ซ and all around sweet aroma but how could it be so straightforward so one more challenge was waiting for us ๐.After seeing that we all left the thought about candies The piece of land on which we were standing was not enough that we had to go over that deadly bridge to get the key which was on other side. Huh!!!! But it was already twilight so we thought we will continue the further journey tomorrow getting up early in the morning. That night we filled our stomach with candies only and went to sleep under a chocolate tree somehow. Soon sun rise and there was a beautiful challenging morning...As soon as we opened our eyes dare was waiting for us..
Really we had no idea how we will cross it but to get to the Castle we had to do. We really had to play on our life .We were getting goosebumps as we see that horrible bridge.We thought we will cross this bridge one by one. Ok that's fine but who will go first ❓❓'.After
having a prolonggggg debate that as we were 5 people so we decided to go in this order First Lays, second Marshal then Boomer, then me and then Cadbuary.
Even a slightest mistake was not Acceptable!!!! As Lays was first to go he put his one step on that bridge very very slowly behind him we all were like just praying to god. Then he slowly put second step...Then gradually third and forth step. Suddenly a breeze (wooooooooo) came he leaned on left side but managed to balance himself,then suddenly his leg slipped and he....Again managed himself (phew).As soon as he reached the middle of bridge Marshal was ready to go. Actually he was venturesome type of boy so he was not afraid to walk there and was walking like on ground but we were...He put his step on the rope (I mean bridge )and he was quite easily was able to walk as he has already done these types of things. After sometime Lays reached the other end .(Thank god).And by that time Marshal reached the middle of the bridge easily. Now it was time for Boomer to go there.He was very afraid. His leg was trembling while putting first step ,he leaned right side (Balanced) moved forward,Then he leaned left (saved...)Then put his third,forth and then fifth step...And suddenly what he had not to do he did๐ฅ๐ฅ๐จ.He looked down thousands Kilometers.. very deep...He started crying and wanted to give up๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฎ.Somehow we managed him ,the two boys were giving him courage from that side and we from this side and he stucked in between.
Finnnnnnnally he reached (we gasped)...Now it was my turn ๐จ...I can not do it .I can I am strong..But what if I fell ???Nothing will happen just continue.These were all the thoughts I was going through..As I moved forward my heart was throbbing in my ears...A cold wave went through my body .I put one shuddering step forward on bridge.Then very very slowly second. Sweat poured through my body as I move ahead.Tried to stay calm ...Moved further hardly breathing ..Slowly and steady reached the end ....(A very very deep breathe ).Now it was Cadbuary's turn. From the distance we could see that she was saying something but could'nt perceive what was it.First we thought she was waving so we waved back...But she wasn't waving.She was saying something else
after some time we got to know that she was saying that she will not come this side.Wait What❓❔❓๐ฑ๐ฑ...But why?She shouted that she is very scared and will not be able to come .We told her she has to come but she denied.It took us whole 1\2 hr to convince her. She somehow put her first step crying and shouting.Then unhurriedly second.As she was going to put third step.A breeze(Wooooooo) came she drooped.. My heart was beating very fast that I could hear it .What if her leg slipped?What if she fell??All of our eyes were wide open not ready to blink once. Fortunately she reached very near to us .Just 2-3 steps more and then done๐คฉ.Very rapturely she placed her pace and then a A very strong gale came, she lost her balanced ,her leg slipped ๐ฑ๐ฐ๐ฑ.Silence for 2 mins...
No voice... all eyes closed .I shouted Cadbuaryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy.Saw marshal bend down trying to pull someone it was Cadbuary ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ.He has struggled to save her.We all helped him to pull Cadbuary up .Saved cadbuary.She hugged Marshal crying and then thanking us all she said Lets go further and we all can together solve any problem. We all got up with new spirit ✨.After that we unfolded the map. As Lays unfolded the map, a strong wind came and blew it from his hands๐ฑ.
If you want to know what happened next then wait for next part I hope you all liked it.Dont forget to comment and follow...Till then Bye...Stay safe
Great blog avni
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ReplyDeleteIt's getting more and more interesting... Luv the way how u made this blog.. ๐this story is full of twists and turns....The phrase "2 mins silence" ๐คซ๐ค๐ถ .... It really was amazing... How the story turns and how it revolves around excitement ๐ค... Waiting ⏳for the next part..๐๐
Thanks alot dear ๐๐๐ฅฐ๐...Sure will post soon ๐๐
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ReplyDeleteThis story is so interesting and I can't wait to read the rest of it ๐๐
Keep it up and post the next part soon!
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all your friends are snacks ๐๐คฃ๐คฃ๐คฃi am laughing so hard๐คฃ๐คฃ
that bridge seriously look deadly...
"suddenly a breeze (woooooo)" i really like how you are adding real effects
"suddenly his leg slipped and he(sudden pause)" why is it getting sooo curious๐๐
if i was on that bridge... i probably was crawling on it
please don't take long to post the next part...i really want to know!!!
oh god...your story better convert in a movie and i am 100% sure, it will get an oscar
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Thank you dear so so so much ❣️๐ฅฐ๐๐๐๐....I am very happy that you like it๐..I will try my best to Post ASAP..
DeleteMovie Oscar ๐ฑ๐คฃ๐คฃ๐คฃ....Thanks alot dear once more..
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Oh again your words looked like reality phooo, wooo ๐
ReplyDeleteVery nice...
And it will be curious to know what happened next... Will you be able to find the map or your journey stops here or ๐ฑ
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Well, write it out veryyy soon ๐
With best wishes
Thank a bunch dear ๐๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐.I am happy that u like it...
DeleteGreat efforts Avni!!!!!
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Thanks for your words and time dear ๐บ..
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I just love your creativity and imagination....
I mean no words left.....
Keep up the good work!
Lots of love and best wishes...and sorry for late reply!
Thank you dear ๐❤️...No problem ...I am happy that u guys are loving it.๐ฅฐ๐
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